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Agony in the Garden |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Abba, Father, let me give back what You gave me! pass me the cup, I’m thirsty! Don’t save me! Rather let them curse me, throw me into the dirt, spit in my face, disgrace me. Let them deny me! I need it! I rip open my shirt, spread my arms crosswise,-- crucify me! I can’t perish unheeded,-- I’m a poet! Soon they shall know it when I arise.... [This message has been edited by Master (edited 06-15-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really really liked this one! Some religion behind this one maybe? Anyway it was very well done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very interetsing and powerful way you wrote it  ...i enjoyed teh read...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Bump this one back to the top.  There forums move too fast! Anyway! I loved the format you used on this one. Quit a powerful piece here. Great read! Keep postin! |
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