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I never know what to put here.... |
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Crash&Burn Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 119 |
oh well... enjoy Our Reality: Hiding in between the talking waters, looking at the bleeding skies, I seem frightened from my calm conscience. Why is that? Finding no answer in myself, the wind wispers in my ear a truth all to real in our existance. "We must be stupid," I say to myself. For it seems everything was given to us yet apparently we don't have anything at all. The tides become low and I must stand in the heavy sand. Truth lays before me and I can only go forward.  I see the darkness coming all is bleak... |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was very good. I enjoyed the read. Regina |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is interesting.....I think there could be more to this one  |
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Crash&Burn Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 119 |
more to it? tell me I'd like to know what you see in it. I see the darkness coming all is bleak... |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
"The tides become low and I must stand in the heavy sand. Truth lays before me and I can only go forward." i liekd how you ended it ...great job!...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one a lot jorge........really deep here man. You go boy and yer deepness! Very well done....one of my favs from u!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Crash&Burn Member
since 2001-01-18
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