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I never know what to put here....

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Crash&Burn
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oh well...   enjoy

Our Reality:

Hiding in between the talking waters,
looking at the bleeding skies,
I seem frightened from my calm conscience.
Why is that?
Finding no answer in myself,
the wind wispers in my ear
a truth all to real in our existance.
"We must be stupid," I say to myself.
For it seems everything was given to us
yet apparently we don't have anything at all.
The tides become low
                 and I must stand in the heavy sand.
Truth lays before me and I can only go forward.



I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

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1 posted 06-14-2001 08:31 PM       View Profile for Ina   Email Ina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ina

This was very good. I enjoyed the read.

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2 posted 06-14-2001 08:31 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

this is interesting.....I think there could be more to this one  
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more to it?
tell me I'd like to know what you see in it.

I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

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4 posted 06-14-2001 10:52 PM       View Profile for anonymous albert ?   Email anonymous albert ?   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymous albert ?

"The tides become low
                 and I must stand in the heavy sand.
Truth lays before me and I can only go forward."

i liekd how you ended it ...great job!...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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5 posted 06-16-2001 11:01 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

I liked this one a lot jorge........really deep here man. You go boy and yer deepness!
Very well done....one of my favs from u!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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