Goodbye(this is to my teacher tell me what you think)

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Goodbye(this is to my teacher tell me what you think)

Nicholas
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since 2001-06-08

Posts 20
Washington , U.S

0 posted 2001-06-14 07:07 PM

This is to my teacher who is leaving so please tell me what you think.

Goodbye

You were a awesome teacher and also a friend
But it seems the school year has come to an end
I had a lot of fun in your class
I earned A's and always did pass
I just want to thank you for the knowledge
That kind of info will get me to college
And now your leaving to retire
Although I don't know why
I think your still young and full of fire
I just want to say thanks, have fun and
Goodbye

To an awesome teacher goodbye Shotwell

-nicholas-

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2001-06-14 07:44 PM

I think it's very nice and I'm sure your teacher will love it

Alyssa

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since 2001-05-30

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2 posted 2001-06-14 08:08 PM

agreed

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Ina
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since 2000-10-09

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Quebec, Canada

3 posted 2001-06-14 08:50 PM

he'll enjoy it

CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

4 posted 2001-06-14 09:10 PM

Very cool, Nick. Awesome tribute to Mr. Shotwell. Totally from the heart,the way that poems were meant to be. VERY good!

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anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

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5 posted 2001-06-14 10:46 PM

very nice tribute...and i hope you give this to your teacher

...thanks for sharing it...bye Nicholas

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

HiddenSparklez
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since 2000-12-29

Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2001-06-15 01:45 AM

Awww... such a good poem for a teacher! It's perfect as it is.

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

Nicholas
Junior Member

since 2001-06-08

Posts 20
Washington , U.S

7 posted 2001-06-15 11:46 AM

Thank you guys for the replies I just want to tell you today is the last day of school and I did give it to him.

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2001-06-16 03:06 PM

Your teacher will definately love this. Who wouldn't? Very sweet of you.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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