Goodnight sweet child of mine.

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Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2001-06-14 05:46 PM

Close your eyes now and go to sleep,
Child of mine, may you have pleasant dreams
Let the little sand man work his magic,
And take you to the land of fantasies.

Goodnight,
Sweet child of mine.
Goodnight,
Sweet child of mine.
Goodnight,
Sweet child of mine.
Sweet child of mine.

Let me read you a bed time story,
Child of mine, count the sheep’s don’t worry
You will soon be in fairytale land,
Maybe even together with Peter Pan.

Goodnight,
Sweet child of mine.
Goodnight,
Sweet child of mine.
Goodnight,
Sweet child of mine.
Sweet child of mine.

Goodnight, ( Goodnight )
Sweet child of mine. ( oooh )
Goodnight, ( pleasant dreams )
Sweet child of mine. ( child of mine )
Goodnight, ( sleep tight )
Sweet child of mine.
Sweet child of mine.

Goodnight, ( Goodnight )
Sweet child of mine. ( oooh )
Goodnight, ( pleasant dreams ) ( Goodnight )
Sweet child of mine. ( child of mine ) yeah
Goodnight, ( sleep tight ) ( sweet child of mine )
Sweet child of mine. ( Goodnight )
Sweet child of mine. ( Goodnight )

Sweet child of mine.
( until fade )

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

1 posted 2001-06-14 06:13 PM

reminds me of the guns n roses song

good work

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

2 posted 2001-06-14 06:18 PM

hey kool...yeah i agree with ina it reminds me of sweet child o mine. also of metallica's enter sandman. did you get inspiried by any songs? i'm curious to know cause i do a lot. great poem by the way, thanks for sharin. later
-fear-

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

3 posted 2001-06-14 06:49 PM

it REALLY reminds me of that song by Guns n Roses, so I totally agree with Ina, but good none the less.. you must be really inspired by songs.

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-06-14 10:54 PM

the topic you wrote on is very similar to what i wrote...hehehe intertesing how that ahppnes...i enjoyed this one alot...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-06-16 02:39 AM

This really reminded me of a Guns & Roses song.
Anyway, I really enjoyed this one. I liked it a lot. You write really good songs, but do you write the music to it aswell?!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-06-21 09:23 PM

beautifully written song my friend
I'm not gonna mention anymore what it reminded me of
everyone already did

keep it up

hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

obscurity of cloud
Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 294
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7 posted 2001-06-21 09:44 PM

very sweet, and the guns & roses reminder is not a bad thing!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

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