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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
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0 posted 2001-06-14 04:58 PM


They read Cinderella, and you wish that it was true,
Prince charming on his white horse rescuing you.
You’re in to romantic movies, and you can never forget
The way you felt when Romeo kissed Juliet,
Longing for that someone to hold you
But you don’t need to long no more.

I will love you like that,
( I will love you like that ).
Even when time has gone
And everything goes wrong
I will love you like that,
( I will love you like that ).
Through the hurt and pain,
through thunder and rain.
I will, I will love you like that.

Made a promise to you, and gave you all of my heart
And I intend to keep it no matter how far you are
Seen the beauty and the beast, and a tear you cried,
When she told him that she loves him on that night.
Waiting for mister right to come around,
Now you don’t have to wait no more.

I will love you like that,
( I will love you like that ).
Even when time has gone
And everything goes wrong
I will love you like that,
( I will love you like that ).
Through the hurt and pain,
through thunder and rain.
I will, I will love you like that.

I will give you tenderness,
Make the earth under you shack
I’ll bye all the happiness,
In this world for you.

I will love you like that,
( I will love you like that ).
Even when time has gone
And everything goes wrong
I will love you like that,
( I will love you like that ).
Through the hurt and pain,
through thunder and rain.
I will, I will love you like that.


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with you
1 posted 2001-06-14 05:03 PM


I like the song by the same name.....this starts out VERY much like it....but I like the way you ended this  
stace_co2003
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2 posted 2001-06-14 06:43 PM


I love that song too...and I like the way you incorporated some of the song into it! it's sooooooooo cool!! keep it up!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

keoni
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since 2000-10-16
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Up in the mountains in the NFC
3 posted 2001-06-14 06:53 PM


This was nice. The song is good, as is this poem.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

Ina
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4 posted 2001-06-14 09:10 PM


This was really good work. i like that song
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5 posted 2001-06-16 03:21 PM


I enjoyed this a lot! Another song well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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