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A tear comes with each word

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keoni
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0 posted 06-14-2001 11:24 AM       View Profile for keoni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for keoni


I donít know what to write
To make this seem better
A tear comes with each word
I write in this letter
Baby I love you, through and through
But the time has come
Where I must leave you

The best times in my life
Have been with you by my side
Through the good times and the bad
Youíve held on for the ride
But things have been changing
More and more each day
We have grown apart
And gone our separate way

Iíve tried to talk to you
But the words donít come out right
I was afraid that I would mess things up
So Iíd try and leave your sight
When you canít talk
Your relationship begins to fill with holes
We lost sight of each other
And moved on to other goals

They say that absence makes the love grow stronger
But theyíll be none left if weíre like this any longer
I know in time
Weíre destined to meet again
If Iím the one for you
Over all the other men
I love you more than anything
And I have to let you know
This is the hardest thing Iíve ever done
But I have to let you go

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

© Copyright 2001 Jon - All Rights Reserved
the_rescue
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1 posted 06-14-2001 11:43 AM       View Profile for the_rescue   Email the_rescue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_rescue

WOW the poem was so awesome such feeling and emotion were involved in this it just well amazed me really I think yuo just topped yourself lol, that one really spoke you knwo what I mean well at least to me cause i have been in that situation before, but wow!

Library

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over.††(SPOKEN)

SEA
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with you


2 posted 06-14-2001 11:51 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

I know how this feels from her point of view....I fell in love with my now husband when I was 14....we had to let each other go...life decided we had lessons we needed to learn away from each other.....well,   we are married now....been together for 7 years.....happy endings can happen... I hope all works out for you...this poem is fantastic    ~SEA
angel_2401
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3 posted 06-14-2001 02:10 PM       View Profile for angel_2401   Email angel_2401   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit angel_2401's Home Page   View IP for angel_2401

Wow, I really like this one, it struck me. It's very emotional.  

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

stace_co2003
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4 posted 06-14-2001 02:32 PM       View Profile for stace_co2003   Email stace_co2003   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit stace_co2003's Home Page   View IP for stace_co2003

awwww *hugs* I liked it! it's goin in my library! keep it up!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

stace_co2003
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In a dream world


5 posted 06-14-2001 02:34 PM       View Profile for stace_co2003   Email stace_co2003   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit stace_co2003's Home Page   View IP for stace_co2003

forgot to put it in my library!! heehee

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

MoeRocko
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since 04-25-2001
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6 posted 06-14-2001 02:43 PM       View Profile for MoeRocko   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MoeRocko

Nice Post! I Loved this One!
  AND no double replies unless you do the same for MoeRocko. Hehe jK   Once again. Very Nice      

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How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

anonymous albert ?
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7 posted 06-14-2001 05:55 PM       View Profile for anonymous albert ?   Email anonymous albert ?   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymous albert ?

quite the emotional poem...i enjoyed this a lot and hope things get better ...bye Jon

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Ina
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8 posted 06-14-2001 06:12 PM       View Profile for Ina   Email Ina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ina

Jon,
wow. this is amazing. Im putting it in my library.
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9 posted 06-16-2001 02:58 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Well done on this one Keoni. Not my favorite by you, but it was very well done. I felt it hit home. Nicely done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Shygirl82
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10 posted 07-07-2001 01:33 AM       View Profile for Shygirl82   Email Shygirl82   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shygirl82

ok sorry I got to this one kinda late but I loved it alot and wanted it to go in my library.  This was simply beautiful..hope things work out for the best.
~Nikki~

It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them.

MindlessPoet
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11 posted 07-07-2001 02:19 AM       View Profile for MindlessPoet   Email MindlessPoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit MindlessPoet's Home Page   View IP for MindlessPoet

Wow!  Awesome poem.  

*TiMMYBoY*
Yeah, that's me.††The Weird One.

Erin
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12 posted 08-14-2001 01:09 AM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

~Jon~
My dear friend I havent heard from you in ages and I am just looking through all your old poems. And this one just grabbed my attention with all it could. God I feel as if I have no words to say because this is something my boyfriend has been trying to tell me for so long but I just dont want to listen. I dont want to lose him. But you are so right when you say if you were meant to be yous will find each other again.

God I am so mad that I have been gone. Look how long ago you posted this. But Im not gonna be around alot work is getting hard. Im working 6 days a week now. I only have Sundays to sleep in. Well email me when you have time... Take care Buddy!!!

                                

"If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend."

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