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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28

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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-06-14 10:29 AM

I sure remember you,
in those distant days.
Back then our love was,
how do you say, it was in a blaze.
We were young,
but our love was strong.
We were meant for each other,
that couldn't be wrong.
But that was then,
and this is now.
One day we will meet again,
and this I vow.
Our memories,
we can keep.
We can dream of them,
in our sleep.
But until we see each other again,
in our memories we stay.
And that's all the things,
that I have to say........

fall hard, practice harder not to fall

© Copyright 2001 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved

keoni
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since 2000-10-16

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Up in the mountains in the NFC

1 posted 2001-06-14 10:47 AM

I liked this one. I like the theme of love will come back. It is a very nice poem.

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

2 posted 2001-06-14 11:14 AM

I really like that poem a lot I understand it hardcore i'm kinda in that situation right now stinks really bad.

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN)

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3 posted 2001-06-14 11:15 AM

I really liked this one, Great work and thanks for the read

Zu

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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2001-06-14 12:01 PM

thanxs for the replies ya'll! i appreciate it cause i just talked 2 this guy i havent seen in like 5 years, and i really hope we can be friends

thanxs so much guys

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

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In a dream world

5 posted 2001-06-15 07:14 PM

this was really good! keep writing! I love this...

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

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6 posted 2001-06-16 02:56 PM

Great job here! I thought it was good and I hope you can be friends aswell!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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7 posted 2001-06-16 03:07 PM

you wrote this very well...and the message...very true1...i liked this lots

...thanks for the read...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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