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fractal007
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0 posted 2001-06-13 07:33 PM


I just felt like writing a poem like this to let go for a while, and because I can't think of ANYTHING!!! to write.  




So,
Ya tripped and fell
ya foo!

I had eyes better than THAT when
I was in my prime old age
Of nineteen years of age!

Now pick yourself up
And dust the arse off
And run on!

Foo!

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23
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1 posted 2001-06-13 07:39 PM


good job man, like it hey I wrote my syllable count one 2 just so you know lol.

Foo

The rescue

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over.  (SPOKEN)

stace_co2003
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Posts 497
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2 posted 2001-06-13 08:17 PM


awwwww, poor Frac...
don't worry, something will come to ya soon!  
well, it's...cute...but foo? lol...I'm sorry, but I find it extremely funny that you...YOU...said foo....heehee...but it's cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute!!  

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

anonymous albert ?
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3 posted 2001-06-13 11:05 PM


is foo...some kind of food? ...hahaha..but yea...very different...enjoyed the read...bye Kevin

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

fractal007
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4 posted 2001-06-14 03:38 AM


Thanks all, for the replies.

lol, Stace, just really liked the Mr. T cartoons on SNL.  "Shuttup Foo!  I'm here ta work!"

LOL



"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

[This message has been edited by fractal007 (edited 06-14-2001).]

Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2001-06-16 02:55 AM


I thought it was funny as hell! Hahaha....the poem was a great message...well done. I really liked it, but the ending "Foo!" was great.
I can just imagine an old man tellin him to run off.....the guy does....and after a pause of like 10 seconds he screams "Foo!"
haha anyway....good job here Frac!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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