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my heart belongs to you
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my heart belongs to you |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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Broken heart,broken girl you were in my mind as the All-American dream boy nice hair,no problems, calm eyes. Most of all kind words and comforting advce But that soon chaged, you told me everything about the real you and the dream boy soon disappeared You fell in love with me that first night we talked, I didnt. I thought you were crazy, I still think you are for actually loving someone like me,it makes me cry. Im afraid of you, Im terrified if I told you the whole truth about me you would walk away, Im afraid that you really dont love me and I fell for you, you cant leave me alone in this horrible life I love you, I really dont think you know how much I do, so ill tell the whole world just how much I love you You have always been there for me wether I want you to or not, wether it was 1 in the morning or 3 in the afternoon I want you to know everything,you think you know everything about me, I want to tell you everything and I will once I can deal with the pain you are so addicting like candy but in a good way Deciding to change my life so you dont have to worry about me anymore When we talk I feel complete wether we are arguing,lecturing me on my life or just being goof balls and when we dont I feel lost and lonely, the tears roll down my cheeks Can I give you my heart?promise me u wont break it, Ill try not to break yours All I want is to be your darling angel and all I want from you is to keep on loving me and never stop. Im standing here stripped of my defenses, showing you the real me, knowing no matter how hard life gets I need you here in the flesh,to hold me and keep me safe and warm, take away my pain and the i can love you even more I love you Brad with all my heart and soul and that will never change only get stronger |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
this is so good regina. u did a wonderful job on explaining ur feelings here. i hope all is well *hugs* i loved this part: 'Im standing here stripped of my defenses, showing you the real me, knowing no matter how hard life gets I need you here in the flesh,to hold me and keep me safe and warm, take away my pain and the i can love you even more' great job hun. *hugs* tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Regina this is so sad but beautiful. I"m glad you've decided to open up to someone and show the real you. I hope things go well. keep sharing  ~*hugs*~ hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This was really pretty...and very honest. It's really cool to feel this way. Always be honest with people, it keeps relationships working. Jenn |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
this one is from teen 3 |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very emotional piece here...i enjoyed the poem but teh situation of what youw ere writing on is a hrad one...i hope thing get better ...bye Ina  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like this a lot |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Regina this is probably the most heartfelt poem I have ever read from you. Wow......the emotion in this one sent me flying off my chair. Haha well no, but if it did it woulda been funny as hell. Anyhow, this poem rocked......it simply rocked. I loved it, adored it....no no.....I feel in love with it......well done regi!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Nicholas Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 20Washington , U.S |
I loved this poem like how you put your feeling and emotions in it great job. |
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