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Ina
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since 2000-10-09
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Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-06-13 03:16 PM


This poem is another insipired by a song. Bush's "glycerine"....probaly my song that is played when im afraid.

GLYCERINE

Maybe the world has yet
to understand my fear
The fear of my loved ones
pershing from my arms
"dont let the days go by"
I have to hold my head high
be proud of me
proud of my body
proud of my soul
"shouldve be easier by 3"
After  the first three left
isnt it suppose to be easier?
"i'm never alone
i'm alone all the time"
where do you come in?
where do your words come from?
"our old friend fear and you and me"
I don't need anyones help
I need just the people who left
stop!
i don't care for the fake words
maybe you should all just
leave me alone...
leave me to my sorrow
leave me to my happiness
that prooves they are in a better
place
im crying now
knowing i have to let go

Regina

"not my time to wonder why
everything's gone white
and everything's grey
now you're here now you're away
i don't want this
remember that
i'll never forget where you're at
don't let the days go by
glycerine
i'm never alone
i'm alone all the time
are you at one
or do you lie"

© Copyright 2001 Regina Levy - All Rights Reserved
fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

1 posted 2001-06-13 05:14 PM


Whoa!  This was awesome.  A few spelling mastakes tho, like "prooves".  Anyhow, the content was great.  You really do well in conveying emotion in free verse poetry.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

anonymous albert ?
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2 posted 2001-06-13 11:46 PM


i really liked this poem...and isnt it great to be inspired by a song and youw rite a poem and it turns out just the youf feel ...graet job...bye Ina

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24
Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)
3 posted 2001-06-14 02:46 AM


haha i was actually listening to the song when i saw this topic.  this is a great post! go ina! LoL.  oh ya...when i first heard the song by bush i thought he said "kiss the rain" (shows how retarded i can be at sometimes lol) luved the poem. later
-fear-

Wood_Stock
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since 2001-05-09
Posts 58
The little yellow
4 posted 2001-06-14 08:19 AM


The song is awsome, I'd say one of my favorites.

I found it interesting, that you like it when you're afraid, I have a completely different perspective of the song, I think it is beautifully constructed.  And I myself, like listening to it all the time!! though particularly when I feel beaten down.

Anyway, you made me think.  And I do a lot of thinking.

Oh yeah! almost forgot, the poem!!
I thought you did a good job with it, and I like how you incorperated the song lyrics.
Keep posting.

the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23
Posts 316
Japan
5 posted 2001-06-14 08:45 AM


I really like your stuff regina it has a lot of emotion and such in it good piece

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over.  (SPOKEN)

keoni
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since 2000-10-16
Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC
6 posted 2001-06-14 10:44 AM


Ina, I really like the idea of these latest poems. Using songs that inspire you and incorporating them into your poem. It shows how the song truly affects you.And you have used some of the best songs.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

Dopey Dope
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7 posted 2001-06-16 10:59 PM


I enjoyed this one Regi! Good job here!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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