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The Panther |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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THE PANTHER The panther walks its jungle, roaming with a loose jointed gate His yellow eyes slit through with flecks of black mirror its soul a soul filled with instinct to pounce, to ravage, to violate..... Spotting an unsuspecting panther, grinning with its feline grin Its instinct to hunt, to eat, to violate... takes over its senses With a steady gate along the soft forest bed no noise, no warning no chance..... with one vicious pounce he has the panther beneath him she fights with all her might seeing a crazed look in her fellow panther' s eye she quits her struggles to be pounced, to be ravaged to be violated..... Regina |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Regina,this is very nice. I love poems with double meanings. Those are the ones that make me think, and I don't get to do that very often. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
*sigh* i always love ur poems regina. heres yet another goin into my library. great job on this. i loved the story u told and the imagery in it. *hugs* tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
you protrayed this nicely...i liked it...hope to see more...bye Ina  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow regina....heavy stuff.... You wrote this one very well. I liked it so much.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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