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chasing rain
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0 posted 06-12-2001 10:22 PM       View Profile for chasing rain   Email chasing rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for chasing rain

To a dear friend:

Like a fragile butterfly
A mystery to me
You are like a dolphin
That knows its way to sea.
With your radiant smile
You can light up any room
On a winter's evening
You are a flower in full bloom.
Every time I talk to you
What I say is true
You'll make me laugh on any day
And make the gray skies blue.
When it rains, it always pours
When I look outside
But when you come, the madness stops
As you calm the storm inside.
You are the rainbow in the sky
The choral in the sea
Rare and beautiful your friendship is
As it will always be.
The sun will shine upon your life
This blessing I do send
Forever I will remember you
For you are my dear friend.


-Leah

© Copyright 2001 chasing rain - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-13-2001 01:02 AM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

This is a beautiful tribute to your friend. The imagery is wonderful, and the flow just makes this poem... well, perfect! I can't believe it doesn't have any replies yet! Well, thanks for sharing!

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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swimming in fairy floss.......


2 posted 06-13-2001 01:21 AM       View Profile for cherish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherish

this is so beautiful..*sniff sniff*...your frined is one special person...i enjoyed  reading this greatly...like erica said..the flow was perfect...ugh..you have to show this to your friend..im sure they'll love you all the more for it! ...thanks for sharing leah.....this is a lovely poem


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it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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3 posted 06-13-2001 01:28 AM       View Profile for HiddenSparklez   Email HiddenSparklez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HiddenSparklez

Awesome poem... it really touched my heart... totally reminds me of my best friend!

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

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4 posted 06-13-2001 04:04 AM       View Profile for fearing-laughter   Email fearing-laughter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fearing-laughter

aww this is so pretty! lol i wish my friends would write me somethin like this...we're all pretty mean to each other though.  (weird i know)  this was a really kool poem! keeeeeeeeep posting!
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oh wow that was cool I realy liked it a lot beautiful imagery and the flow was really great thanx going in lib

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6 posted 06-13-2001 09:08 AM       View Profile for vixengrl04   Email vixengrl04   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vixengrl04

This was beautifully written.  You really did a wonderful job with this, and I hope to find more of your work.  

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

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7 posted 06-13-2001 12:15 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

Aww! That was so sweet! And, that's all I have to say... Keep it up!

Rhonda  

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8 posted 06-13-2001 06:12 PM       View Profile for chasing rain   Email chasing rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for chasing rain

Thank you all for your comments...although...I HAVE NO FRIENDS!!! WAAAAAAAAH!
*in the background: LIAR!*
... Ok, I lied.

I heard a funny quote once...*scratches head* It went like this...
So, this guy walks into a bar...OW!!! :)

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9 posted 06-14-2001 12:06 AM       View Profile for anonymous albert ?   Email anonymous albert ?   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymous albert ?

quite the touching piece and i hope you did give this to the person you wrote it for....beautiful poem ...bye LEah

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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10 posted 06-14-2001 01:47 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

this is sweetness......wrapped up in rhyme  
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11 posted 06-16-2001 02:49 AM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Nicely done here Leah! This rocked! I really thought this was a wonderful poem!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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12 posted 06-21-2001 09:51 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

beautiful words my friend. really sweet. keep it coming

hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

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What a tear jerker! Its so beautiful and touching! Great write, keep it up.
chasing rain
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14 posted 06-21-2001 10:06 PM       View Profile for chasing rain   Email chasing rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for chasing rain

AGH! 13! BAD NUMBER!
I'm not superstitious though...it's just for the rest of them...
Thank you all for your comments!   Much appreciated.
anonymousfemale
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15 posted 09-07-2001 02:52 PM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

Aww Leah you shouldn't have!   lol

Nah this is a really nice piece. What a wonderful friend you have. I hope this friendship remains like this forever.  

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

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whoa, the site worked! (It didn't last time I tried to come here..)

Anyway, that is a very cool poem.  I bet it made your friend smile realll wide  

*TiMMYBoY*
Yeah, that's me.  The Weird One.

 
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