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Teen Poetry #4

Don't Go

MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

0 posted 2001-06-12 03:09 PM

Mother you had me
But I never had you
I wanted you
You didn't want me

Father you left me
But I never left you
I needed you
You didn't need me

I couldn't walk
but I tried to run
So I just want to tell you
Goodbye
Goodbye

This Is Not Here

How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

1 posted 2001-06-12 04:10 PM

You express your feelings well. Powerful and meaningful..always. It's a shame that any of us have to feel this way. But as always, eventually we become freed of our parents' mistakes.

"...if you want love you must be love.."
Billy Corgan, Smashing Pumpkins

Julian L. Chester
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 50

2 posted 2001-06-12 05:04 PM

i like the poem its a natural and you express yourself and your feelings with our ne profanity and i like that. so nice poem.

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

3 posted 2001-06-12 05:15 PM

i loved it! great job...and i know how you feel

hope everything is ok

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-06-12 07:34 PM

I enjoyed this poem. It was very sad though. I find it sad when a parent or child can't develope a healthy relationship. Both miss out.
I wish you luck!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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