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the_rescue
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0 posted 2001-06-12 10:57 AM


Don't know exactly when we met
but it will never be a thing I regret
We talk each and every day
and honestly I wouldn't have it any other way
even though you never call me on the phone
you brighten up my day when I am feeling alone.
A personality and your picture is all that I know
but my appreciation for you, I really want to show
you were there for me when I all I could do was cry
you told me to press on even though I wanted to die
We talk about the relationships that we go through
try to help each other figure out what to do
you hold me accountable to God I hope I do the same
a smile fills my face when I hear or see your name
So what if we never met like most people do
I don't think I'd trade anything for my "time" with you
you make me laugh and smile and most of all think
you tell me so shut up when my ideas really stink
you convict me and put me in my place
fuss at me as if we were face to face
So yeah I'll be here for you as long as I can
certain things about you make me want to be a better man
So this is for you I hope you enjoy
because my formerly mundain days at work are now filled with joy
Maybe it's  the way you are facinated with thom
or the way you thing the elms are the bomb
either way I just know your special to me
and I really hope that is something you can see


The_Rescue

Dedicated to a dear friend

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over.  (SPOKEN)

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1 posted 2001-06-12 11:09 AM


I really enjoyed the read, good work on this one  
Zu

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2 posted 2001-06-12 12:32 PM


hey... wow... that's so cool.  i know someone like that... been talking to him for 2 years and... wow. its just like that.  

dr. jo-bizz

But His word was in my heart
like a burning fire
Shut up in my bones;
I was weary of holding back,
And I could not.

chasing rain
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3 posted 2001-06-12 05:18 PM


I like, I like!   Very sweet.

¤ ¢H@§ïÑg RåIñ ¤

I heard a funny quote once...*scratches head* It went like this...
So, this guy walks into a bar...OW!!! :)

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4 posted 2001-06-12 06:12 PM


so very sweet...... big smiles  
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5 posted 2001-06-12 07:47 PM


Sweet indeed! I liked this one a lot!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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6 posted 2001-06-13 12:13 PM


This is a beautiful tribute to your friend. It's wonderful that you have someone like this in your life. I hope you show it to them! Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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7 posted 2001-06-14 12:14 PM


great poem...i liekd how youw rote this...i bet many can rewlate to this ...great tribute as well...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

keoni
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8 posted 2001-06-14 11:03 AM


This is nice.Great friends are hard to come by. I hope you show this person. They would appreciate it.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

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9 posted 2001-06-15 07:39 PM


ya know this reminds me of a great guy named Zu. yeah... love the poem sweetie. keep writing!!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

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10 posted 2001-06-20 12:16 PM


such sweet words. beautiful!!!
keep sharing
thanks for the read

hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

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11 posted 2001-06-20 12:19 PM


This is such a sweet poem!  Nice work.  I enjoyed this a lot.

--Marie

"Imagine a pageant...
In my head the flesh seems thicker,
Sandpaper tears corrode the filth,
And I need you now somehow." --Silverchair

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