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CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-06-11 06:55 PM


Haha, yes, this another about a person I like. I now have written a poem about each of the 3 people that I like at the moment.  Anyway, I just wrote this one today.  Let me know what you think of it, and yes I do know that my "love life" is REALLY messed up.  lol  


SHAWNA

I really like you
But I'm not sure you know
We don't talk that often
Just when you walk home

I'm glad that we are friends
But sometimes I wish it was more
You gave me my first dance
My heart pounded on that floor

I've been liking you from a distance
I don't know that you'd understand
I strongly doubt that you like me too
But I would love to take your hand

We laugh, we joke
I like spending time with you
I don't think I'll be able to let you know
But I only wish you knew

Shawna, I only wish
That I knew what you would say
I don't want to tell and make us feel dumb
But I guess there could come a day

      - Cody -

If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

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1 posted 2001-06-11 07:16 PM


tell her.....tell one of them...tell all of them....LOL....just be honest about your feelings   I thought this was a good starting point to tell her how you feel  
Nicholas
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since 2001-06-08
Posts 20
Washington , U.S
2 posted 2001-06-11 08:41 PM


Good job Cody, I liked this poem keep on writing them.
-nicholas-

fozzyozzy
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since 2001-03-15
Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia
3 posted 2001-06-11 10:15 PM


This is just like out of my life. Go for it man, just be careful you don't get the "friends talk" X3.  Whoo that would be rough.  Good poem though.  Might be a good icebreaker.

"This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot

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4 posted 2001-06-12 01:48 AM


Ooo....Cody doing the playa thing, haha only nobody knows it.
I know it though! 3 women man? Geeesh!
Well I liked this one....i say....figure out who you want most and go for it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

MindlessPoet
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since 2001-04-20
Posts 106
Texas
5 posted 2001-06-13 12:34 PM


Geez, Cody, pick a woman already!    haha, just don't quit writing

*TiMMYBoY*
Yeah, that's me.  The Weird One.

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