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Teen Poetry #4

that's what happened to us

the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

0 posted 2001-06-11 08:42 AM

Gone
Disappeared
Vanishished into thin air
that's what happened to us

Jerk
neglector
just let you stand there
that's what happend to us

Time
Opposistion
not showing I care
that's what happened to us

You
Him
something I couldn't bear
that's what happened to us

You
Me
something I long to share
will that again happen to us

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN)

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

1 posted 2001-06-11 09:23 AM

Great work I really enjoyed the read... Zu

"Death solves all problems, no man, no problem" J.V.Stalin 1918.

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

2 posted 2001-06-11 09:48 AM

This was really good. Man o man. arent girlfriends/ boyfriends complicated? lol.
Hope all works out in the end.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-06-11 07:08 PM

Well done here! I liked this one and hope the best happens.....so good luck man!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

DarkAngelOfTheStars
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

4 posted 2001-06-11 08:01 PM

i really liked this good job and keep it up!

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

5 posted 2001-06-11 09:01 PM

I really like that one. Did you give her the poem...? I thought it has really good rythm and flow. Keep it up.

Rhonda

Oh yeah. Definately show it to her!

"Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy."

fozzyozzy
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since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

6 posted 2001-06-11 10:09 PM

me likey. Nice quick read. thanks again for the great read.

"This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot

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