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Recipe for pain.

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Marshalzu
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0 posted 06-10-2001 05:24 PM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

Recipe for pain.


175g Selfish love (7oz)
200g Hate from love gone sour (8oz)
1 x 2.5 ml Forgotten teardrops (1/2 tsp)
25g Regrets from yesterday (1oz)
Fear unbeaten with 75ml endless pain (5tbsp)
75ml of unrequited love (5tbsp)
few drops from a lifetime of failure
75ml of my distress (5tbsp)

Mix together hate and love,
And rub in salt into my eyes,
Struck down by lightning from above,
From darkened summer skies,

Stir in failure, regret and fear,
Add unrequited love and pain,
Whisk until it all turns clear,
And throw it down the drain,

Scrape the remenants of your life,
Just go and forget the mess,
Slice the mixture with a knife,
And hide all your distress,

Turn the heat up till it startís to bake,
And it starts to show the grain,
30 minutes and you have a cake,
From a recipe for pain.


Thanks for the idea Stace      

Zu

"Death solves all problems, no man, no problem" J.V.Stalin 1918.

© Copyright 2001 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
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amazingly creative...i really liked how you wrote this...great poem ...hope to see more...bye marsha

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awww, you're welcome!  

and stop being so hard on yourself. I like this. whether that means anything or not, I dunno...but when I said recipe for pain..that's not exactly what i was talking about   but you know that.  

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

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Beaituful! AWESOME poem!!! Great idea and very creatively done by you Zu! I really really loved this poem. Awesome!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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Talking about creativity.  You've done well Zu.  keep em coming

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groovy!

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This is bloody good, Andrew. I am most impressed with the fluency and uniqueness of the writing. This should be brought up to teen #6 so people can take a look.

Glad i caught it when i went cobweb searching.

~AF~

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