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'late' thought you all might appreciate a laugh.

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quietlydying
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0 posted 06-10-2001 03:50 PM       View Profile for quietlydying   Email quietlydying   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for quietlydying

alright, i wrote this when i was seven and it's been hanging on my grandparents fridge for the last ten years (seriously).  i thought you all might appreciate a laugh.  heh.

LATE

i woke up in the morning,
nine o'clock!
i yelled,
looking for my sock.

i grabbed a fruit
for a snack
half way there i realized
i forgot my backpack.

i ran back home
took a wrong turn
and ran into the golf dome!

i lost a shoe or two
on the way
and when i got there
it was saturday!

- jen
© Copyright 2001 jennifer elizabeth - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-10-2001 03:58 PM       View Profile for Julian L. Chester   Email Julian L. Chester   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julian L. Chester

thanx for the laugh i like the poem a lot it was excellent. you must of been a good poet when u were 7 and i hope u stay with it cause it might just be a good thing for you. so please stop by and check out my poems also thanx
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2 posted 06-10-2001 05:05 PM       View Profile for Spice   Email Spice   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Spice's Home Page   View IP for Spice

HaHa- Cute.
I like this!
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3 posted 06-10-2001 05:33 PM       View Profile for anonymous albert ?   Email anonymous albert ?   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymous albert ?

cute poem...haha...i liked it and youw rote this when you was 7!..wow..i dint even know my abc's..umm..well...anyways...bye

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4 posted 06-10-2001 06:55 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Haha I liked this one. Awwwwww you were so cute when you were little  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 06-10-2001 07:36 PM       View Profile for obscurity of cloud   Email obscurity of cloud   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for obscurity of cloud

That's so cute!  I used to write stuff jsut like this and your comment reminded me of a poem on my grandparents' fridge that i wrote when i was 6:
Good bye is very hard
And i love you so much
And that is why i wrote this poem.

Food for thought, or maybe not.   Thanks for this one!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

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6 posted 06-15-2001 09:59 AM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

This is really good for being written at that age. lol I like it  

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7 posted 06-15-2001 07:06 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

That was so cool! Into my library!
Rhonda  


"Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school."

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8 posted 11-09-2002 06:33 AM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

This is so damn cute, Jen.
It's nice to see you in all angles.

oh anonymous one

Consider yourself added to the hitlist.

 
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