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Julian L. Chester
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0 posted 2001-06-10 03:19 PM


                        LOVE

Love is the most precious thing in the world.
Love can be powerfuland dangerous if u do not know the meaning of it.
Or know how to use it. Keep it close to u.
And attached to u where evere u go.
Never let it get the best of u.
Love is not a crime but can be.
No matter what u say or think when love is in your mind,
You will act crazy and funny like u don't know what to do with yourself.
Love is a contract and can be led to a commitment. If u r not committed to someone what is the point of loving someone?
Love hurts, its painful when u don't mean it.
Do not play with love because love is not a game,
Love is not a will of fun and playful doubts.
Love is a confinment of happiness, adventure, agreement, and compassion.
Curious is is u can not say u love someone,
When u only like someone because there is a big difference between LOVE and LIKE.
Love can be taught in certain and many different ways but if u want to find out u must look and search and also ask questions.
So remember what i say and take heed of it
Or there will be some consequences to pay if used wrong.

© Copyright 2001 Julian L. Chester - All Rights Reserved
Ina
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1 posted 2001-06-10 06:33 PM


welcome to passions!

This was a good post. hope to see more.

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2 posted 2001-06-10 10:49 PM


!!WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!...this was a nice forst post...i enjoyed it and hoep to see you read share and reply aLOT...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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3 posted 2001-06-10 11:42 PM


Hey,

   First of all wonderful poem, and great begining. Welcome to passions   I know you will love it. Also check your mail  

       -- Linc

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4 posted 2001-06-11 01:52 AM


Welcome to Passions!
This was a completely different message from you Sex poems. I really liked this one! Well done and I hope to see you more often!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-06-11 06:33 AM


Welcome To passions!  

Great first post and i cant wait to see more from you, welcome  

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6 posted 2001-06-11 06:33 AM


Sorry   I Hit the reply button twice...hehehe

[This message has been edited by xShUgArHiGhx (edited 06-11-2001).]

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7 posted 2001-06-15 05:00 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

I know I read the others first before this and thi sdefinitely is much better than the others.  Hope you do enjoy your saty here in Passions for Poetry.  Happy sharing and reading as well.

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic

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8 posted 2001-06-15 07:18 PM


Welcome to Passions! This is really well done and I like it!  

Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.
-Publilus Syrus

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9 posted 2001-06-16 03:16 PM


Welcome to pipTalk.  I enjoyed this read.  Very nice first post.  You're very right, love isn't something to be played with... to be thrown around lightly.  I'm glad you acknowledge this.  Nice work.  I look forward to seeing more from you.

--Marie

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Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection.  Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

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