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Isabel Galaxia
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0 posted 06-10-2001 02:43 PM       View Profile for Isabel Galaxia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Isabel Galaxia


Put down the bottle
Stand up and look at me
Set down the glass
     Calm down, I didn't say anything
Go to the rave
Take your mom to a bar
Put down the keys
Want a tree wrapped around your car?
     But it's not hot in here
No pot
No h
No ecstasy
     Can't you remember?
No blow
No speed
No LSD
     You promised me
No booze
No huffing
No ruffies
     I can't understand you
Rehab? I have the number
You get high with you mom?
I'll get your dad's number
Call him, drop the bomb
     But there's no one over there
Put down the bottle
Look me in the eye
Are you gonna stop,
Or would you rather die?
    
Okay just a note, I have no problem with drugs, alcohol or anything of the like.  Just came up with this when thinking about a friend of mine.  I don't think he's into quite as many drugs as I've listed, but I just wanted to cover all ground.  I'm always grateful for advice, but he doesn't listen to reason.  
Bel

[This message has been edited by Isabel Galaxia (edited 06-10-2001).]

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Julian L. Chester
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1 posted 06-10-2001 03:55 PM       View Profile for Julian L. Chester   Email Julian L. Chester   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julian L. Chester

hi i like your poem i hope u get around to reaed three of my poems i written. i do believe u might want to take him to the hospital no matter what he says or does and put him in one of those programs. but your poem was excellent and it makes since on what your trying to say and put out there and i feel u one that. so like i say, "SAY NO TO DRUGS."
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2 posted 06-10-2001 06:52 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Well done Isabel. SAY NO TO DRUGS. You really put out a good message here because addictions are horrible.....you may like a drug but if you do it too much you are lost and in the gutter. People can learn from this.
Well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

ethel lahootie
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3 posted 06-10-2001 07:43 PM       View Profile for ethel lahootie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ethel lahootie

errrr...ummm....yeah. good job writing this kT! hows the summer been? wel..i cant say if u wanna talk then we'll talk in cpII but hey if ya wanna talk or do something sometime call me ok? good poem! hope that person is ok. --jo--
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4 posted 06-14-2001 07:43 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

I like what you're trying to do
help your friends by helping them to stop their addictions
JUST SAY NO

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic

Ina
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5 posted 06-14-2001 08:52 PM       View Profile for Ina   Email Ina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ina

I really can comment on the content.  
BUt it was very well written. just wanted to say people dont take roofies, unless its given to them in a drink. where a guy or gurl plans to take advantage of them

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Isabel Galaxia
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6 posted 06-14-2001 09:45 PM       View Profile for Isabel Galaxia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Isabel Galaxia

Julian- thanks much
Dopey- Gracias
Ethel- It's not Cal or Craig or neone you know, so don't worry!!!  Yeah...don't you almost miss CPII??
(Note almost)
Acire- Thanks muchacho
Ina- Thanks.  And yeah, I know  , really.
Thanks again
fearing-laughter
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7 posted 06-15-2001 02:04 AM       View Profile for fearing-laughter   Email fearing-laughter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fearing-laughter

hey...i really liked this poem.  kind of sad how some kids are brainwashed to think that drugs are cool, but oh well.  people in my family have gone thru this, but i have learned to stay out of it.  i know that seems cruel, but sometimes i think the person needs to deal with it on their own.  anywayz...this was a really great poem.  thanks 4 the read :-) later
-fear-
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8 posted 06-15-2001 08:57 AM       View Profile for Spine Grinder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Spine Grinder

this was SUCH a good poem, i loved it!it's going in my library!

fall hard, practice harder not to fall

anonymousfemale
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9 posted 09-08-2001 04:00 AM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

Powerful piece. It's often sad when we see someone we know deteriorate due to drugs. You've expressed yourself well and what can I say? You always write well and this piece is no exception.  

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

 
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