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stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

0 posted 2001-06-10 03:08 AM

He walked by his sisters room
Inside he heard her cry.
She was on the phone with a friend-
Saying she wished she would die.

Later on he soon found out
her and her boyfriend had been in a fight.
She had been raped by her best friends brother,
Her boyfriend blamed her - it just wasn't right.

suddenly he heard her cry out in pain -
He quickly opened the door
and walked into the room
To find her laying bleeding on the floor.

He called for their mom
and ran out of the room
picked up the phone and dialed 911
He managed to keep calm thru certain doom.

He walked into her new room-
she was laying in the hospital bed.
he looked into her eyes,
but not a word he said.

She smiled at him
with tears in her eyes
"thank you dear brother,
You're my angel in disguise"
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it's been a long night--I can't sleep, and this is what resulted...this and 2 other poems.

[This message has been edited by stace_co2003 (edited 06-10-2001).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-06-10 04:15 AM

I enjoyed this poem because although the woman tried to comit an act of shear stupidity this poem glorifies LIFE. The brother saves his sister and she thanks him for that, and thus it simply says that LIFE is GOOD.
I enjoyed this poem greatly.