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Crash&Burn
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0 posted 06-10-2001 01:08 AM       View Profile for Crash&Burn   Email Crash&Burn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Crash&Burn

here's I lil something I made up just now.

I haven't posted in some time
yet this is no surprise
since my poems often lack
that little bing-bang
Now it's the nightime
and I'm really bored
this is no good
maybe you'll snore
I wont give up so easily
thought my thoughts are now real cheesee
yet the tides might change
and tomorrow new inspiration will be at sway.



I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

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fozzyozzy
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since 03-15-2001
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1 posted 06-10-2001 01:12 AM       View Profile for fozzyozzy   Email fozzyozzy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit fozzyozzy's Home Page   View IP for fozzyozzy

Insomnia isn't that bad.  I've never met someone whose mind wasn't "blah" at some time or another.  I just wait for a sunset or something like rain for inspiration (totally cheesee).

"This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot

Crash&Burn
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2 posted 06-10-2001 01:17 AM       View Profile for Crash&Burn   Email Crash&Burn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crash&Burn

lol well see poems like that one up there only are created in the depths of pure boredom so when the nothingness has you, you just come up with well "blah"

anyways thanx for posting

I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

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3 posted 06-10-2001 04:38 AM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Mira jorge.....que hay papi? Estas bien?....sabes que te quiero mucho, verdad?!

Te quiero chingar! Si! Soy pato!
Adios!

Y jorge, no digas nada a nadie aqui en pip oka? Tenemos que hablar en espanol....solamente en espanol....


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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Crash&Burn
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4 posted 06-10-2001 11:55 AM       View Profile for Crash&Burn   Email Crash&Burn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crash&Burn

ok
y pq quieres hablar en espaņol, para tripearte a la gente?
y no no me chingas porfavor

I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

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