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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180
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I need someone Someone who love me Someone who will be there Someone who will really care I need someone to love Someone I could trust Someone who would be true Someone to hold me tigth To kiss me Hug me Sleep by my side at nigth This 'someone' could be you, you know I can love you if you let me All or nothing, baby Its up to you to chose I want you I'll be good I wont hurt you I wont let it go And I want you to know Someone could be you Let me love you Let me care It could be you.. ..You know I'll always be true.. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Wow Zarina! I really liked this one. You expressed yourself greatly.  |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
your emotions were well said...i liked it and hope thinsg turn out best for you ...bye carina  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was great work. WIshes....i hope all turns out well. REgina |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Zarina, a beautiful poem with a sense of raw desire. I hope you get what you want.....GOod luck with it all.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
thank you.. but it wont work out. it's all hopeless, really. *sigh* he wont let me..on a way, I understand him, cause..oh well. It's so much, I shouldn't bother you with it. |
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