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Envy |
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n e where Junior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 32Australia |
I stare over at you, and begin to write a poem in my head... How much I envy that one Who gets to walk you to you your door Who gets to fall into your deep eyes And gets to chose whether or not They want to remain there I envy that one Who's lips kiss yours And taste the sweetness And the bitterness Of your soft tears I envy the one That feels the rush of anxiousness At the moment of your touch Who takes for granted Every moment they are with you I envy that one Who's eyes meet yours First thing in the morning Who knows how to treat you But I don't think they do I really don't think they do Since you are crying the tears That they once would have kissed goodbye I sigh... ~I'd rather see the world from another angle~ Jewel. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
We are everyday angels....  Thanks for the poem. I enjoyed it.  ~Carly "Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught..." |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice ...i enjoyed the images that was protrayed in this poem...great job!...bye  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job on this one.....try to move on though man....it's not healthy dwelling upon it Good luck  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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