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Only a Fantazy |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Here on earth do we stand Above us only sky. Heaven set before us Where only angels fly. Fleeting shadows darting In the fragile light Only do they show themselves In the star lit night. Wood nymphs delight at mankind's love While elven ladies blush Every man that walks on by Is greeted by a hush. Griffins control the open sky Dwarves control the earth Spectres steal a mortal's soul And threatens mankind's worth. With beauty beyond description Do faeries fly away The woodland is silent and still As God makes us from clay. =========== I'm a fantasy freak.  |
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XFalloutX Junior Member
since 2001-05-13
Posts 31NC |
*CLAPS* Good job...very good job...Yes Leah you do live in a fantasy world. But don't we all? or atleast wish we could...I dunno I'm just weird and evil *wink* bye bye "should I smile because we are friends or cry because thats all will ever be?". |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
i liked it...it was very interesting nice job Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
must be a great place to go  ...i liked this very different but of course an interetsing read...bye Leah  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Dr. Jo-Bizz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97 |
yeah... i love c.s. lewis/tolkien fiction... rocks my world...  dr. jo-bizz But His word was in my heart |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
Hey Leah!! I like this poem alot. hope to read more from you soon!! I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done! I am a fantasy freak myself. I liked this a lot Leah!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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