navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #4 » Express My Mind
Teen Poetry #4
Post A Reply Post New Topic Express My Mind Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
PiXiEpUnKeR
Junior Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 49
IL, USA

0 posted 2001-06-08 11:59 AM


It's a scream inside,
A pure fun factor

Plaid Pants and Skirts,
Blue Mohawks
Loud Music

It's me,
this scream,
LET IT OUT!

Chains and Bracelets,
speak your mind
No rule

This is us,
these screams,
LET IT OUT!

It's a scream inside
a pure PUNK factor


[This message has been edited by PiXiEpUnKeR (edited 06-08-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Andriana Fico - All Rights Reserved
the_rescue
Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316
Japan
1 posted 2001-06-08 12:02 PM


Right on punk rawk all the way!  by the way poem was good lol

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over.  (SPOKEN)

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255

2 posted 2001-06-08 08:32 PM


very interesting....good job  

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

anonymous albert ?
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-06-08 09:44 PM


same here...interesting ...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dr. Jo-Bizz
Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97

4 posted 2001-06-09 12:17 PM


hey that's cool.  i've been on the inside of the "punk scene" before.... i guess i got really fed up with the "you're not punky unless you're punky like me" kind of attitude that I kept seeing... as I see it, by their own deffinition "punk" is about being yourself... not being "yourself just like the rest of your clique"... because that is just an elitist form of conformity...  anyways.. sorry.  I guess i'm done spouting off.     keep rocking.

dr. jo-bizz

But His word was in my heart
like a burning fire
Shut up in my bones;
I was weary of holding back,
And I could not.

PiXiEpUnKeR
Junior Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 49
IL, USA
5 posted 2001-06-09 12:35 PM


I honestly see punk as really loving the music... relating to it... and really expressing yourself to express YOURself.. not just to LOOK punk... to dress and act punk because you FEEL punk... not cause everyone else is doing it!! Thanks for your imput!! This is one of my more "fun" poems, I'm glad to see the response to it!
anonymousfemale
Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
6 posted 2001-06-09 02:46 AM


Booya! Being punk is the stuff. Great expression in this piece. Be true to yourself, be punk.  

~AF~

Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!!

stace_co2003
Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497
In a dream world
7 posted 2001-06-09 05:52 PM


I like this.....well, I don't really know what the punk scene is all about, I've never been there or done that...but I like the poem that came out of it  

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

Dopey Dope
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
8 posted 2001-06-10 03:24 AM


This was interesting....Well I'm not a "punk" but I am myself and I can scream so yea.....scream!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #4 » Express My Mind

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary