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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
hmm this isnt that good but in english class we had to write a poem about something and put the words in it......like if you wrote about a heart you put it in a heart...ahh get it? lol im not too good at writing for school cuz i hate everyone there to read my poems but heres mine i thought it was pretty cute. Full of bright colors Red yellow green and blue Just to name a few All shapes and sizes Dimonds and squares Big and small But no matter the color shape or size One things for sure You better hold on tight Don't let the wind blow away your KITE! hehe ok i know im a dork  Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
um well that was a decent poem and no your not a dork you just need help LOL jk. I think I would ahve written about octagons though easier to write insyde of. Later and by the way I like your quote in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN) |
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Dr. Jo-Bizz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97 |
hee hee... yeah I liked your signature too.. I liked your poem. it was short and sweet. dr. jo-bizz But His word was in my heart |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
..."kat the dork"  hehehe...j/k...but this poem came out really cute...LOL...i enjoyed the read...bye Kat  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-09-2001).] |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
This is very cute. i liked the last three lines. well done fate can only take you so far, the rest is up to you |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
i had to do that once..but it was like 4th grade lol i wanted to kill the sexiest person alive, but then i realized suicide is a crime!! :) |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
lol haha! i go to a private school so we never do anything important! Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
And we all know how private schools do nothing imp! Nicely done, it was a cute poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
kool poem...i've always wondered if someone could write about something totally childish, but also make it come out decent sounding. you did that :-) oh yeah, by the way going to a private school doesn't sound so bad. last year our teacher made us write "heartfelt personal narratives." ...half the class cried while reading their's lol. again, cute poem :-) -fear- |
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