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PiXiEpUnKeR
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since 2001-06-06
Posts 49
IL, USA

0 posted 2001-06-07 09:59 PM


I'm filled with RAGE
sadness, envy, and hate
I did this to you
but my feelings and yours
simply do not relate

I hope it was worth it
keeping it deep inside you
you made me wait to hurt
and now its all through

What were you thinking?
with her lips on yours?
I'll just leave, don't worry
no hurt anymore

I just wish that you told me
I'm your angel, your everything
I dont want this brought up
when we're reminiscing

I love you baby
I hate to cry
I want to stay here
I can't pass this by

Just tell me you're sorry
that you want to be with me
our love will pass these obstacles
please wait, we'll see

© Copyright 2001 Andriana Fico - All Rights Reserved
DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255

1 posted 2001-06-07 10:03 PM


aww this is sad im here if you need to talk.....i hope things work out

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

HVNsnt82086
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 30
United States
2 posted 2001-06-07 10:18 PM


I loved this one because it showed who you really are.  It showed that you're not one to be messed with, but you forgive someone if they ask for it.  It was nicely written, and showed definate emotion.  Nice job!!

"So when you feel like hope is gone, look inside you and be strong, and you'll finally see the truth...that a hero lies in you." *~Mariah Carey- Hero~

Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
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Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
3 posted 2001-06-09 07:08 PM


You are quite the strong person to view this in a mature manner. Just understand the difference between being stupid and forgiving. Some guys just don't deserve the chance, ya know?
I know you'll make the right choice and I wish you the best of luck  
Well done on the poem. Very raw and real. I could feel you just saying this out loud all sad like. I hope you get better.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies
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Twilight Zone
4 posted 2001-06-12 10:47 AM


I think you need to listen to Dopey.  This guy might just end up doing the same thing over and over.  Don't forget the so called "GAME".  I know it's hard, but find it in you to see the truth.  Hnag in there

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