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HVNsnt82086
Junior Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 30
United States

0 posted 2001-06-07 01:24 AM

trust me, life is not so bad
it's actually quite great
so put aside the lttle things,
forget about the hate

smile in the mirror
try to laugh for fun
if you learn to love yourself,
the best is far from done

look outside, it's beautiful
how lucky that we are
we're free to watch the sunrise
or wish upon a star

paint a picture of the ocean
go dancing on a cloud
listen to birds sing their song,
it's such a pretty sound

find the good in everyone,
believe that it is there
but the only way they'll open up
is if they know you care

don't take anything for granted
you can be happy if you try
so close your eyes and take a breath,
spread your wings and fly

"So when you feel like hope is gone, look inside you and be strong, and you'll finally see the truth...that a hero lies in you." *~Mariah Carey- Hero~

[This message has been edited by HVNsnt82086 (edited 06-07-2001).]

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

1 posted 2001-06-07 01:53 AM

smile in the mirror
                               try to laugh for fun
                               if you learn to love yourself,
                               the best is far from done
wow..this is so inspirational....smile in the mirror..haha..if i do the mirror will crack!!..hahah...thank you for such a lovely read laura..keep em comming!!!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-06-07 02:13 AM

wow!...i loved this piece...beautful images of life best sides...you told it very well and a very inspring poem...the poem had so much to it...i enjoyed this too much...hope to see more

...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

3 posted 2001-06-07 09:21 AM

I really liked this one. I didnt like it as much as the other two of yours that I just read, but it was still well written.

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow. I feel kinda sorry for it...

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

4 posted 2001-06-07 01:14 PM

hey i liked this very much.....gives me something to try

hehe nice poem

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

MindlessPoet
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 106
Texas

5 posted 2001-06-07 08:35 PM

Awesome poem, very inspiring. Me likes

*TiMMYBoY*
Yeah, that's me. The Weird One.

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

6 posted 2001-06-08 12:34 PM

I loved this poem! It's so going in my library!

Whatever tomorrow brings I'll be there, with open arms, and open eyes ~Incubus~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-06-09 11:03 PM

This was so beautiful. I liked this one a lot!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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