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I Admire The One... |
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HVNsnt82086 Junior Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 30United States |
I admire the one who is strongest when weak, and is hardly ever knocked down. But when she is, she gets right back up, with both feet on the ground. I admire the one who's beauty, is more than just skin-deep. Who my love for in my heart, will always and forever keep. Her love for life grows stronger every day, which passes by. But she has her share of troubles, perhaps more- you can see it in her eyes. I admire the one who stands proud and tall, taking life as it comes. Her power in spirit, as well as mind, in one word- strength- it sums. She keeps quiet about her troubles, with a smile on her face. She isn't quick to judge, she determines at her own pace. I wish I had her courage, so by life I'm not overthrown. But these characteristics, only she can possess, in her and her alone. "So when you feel like hope is gone, look inside you and be strong, and you'll finally see the truth...that a hero lies in you." *~Mariah Carey- Hero~ |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Wow, great piece o' work ya got there! I really liked your form, and it flowed nicely. Your use and arrangement of words are so cleanly done! Good work! Hope to see more from you! ¤ ¢H@§ïÑg RåIñ ¤ I heard a funny quote once...*scratches head* |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great poem...there something some can think about in this...i liekd the way you have written this also...enjoyed a lot...bye laura  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
aawwwwwwwwwwwwwww..wow....sounds like my mum...  ...this was so nice...you write beautifully..i wish i was the one you were talking about...!!!..keep posting..
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
aww this is a very nice and amazing poem. Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done! I enjoyed this one! Sweet.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Ah, I really liked this! Keep up the good thoughts...  ~Carly "Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught..." |
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