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HVNsnt82086
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0 posted 2001-06-06 11:07 PM


perhaps one day i'll tell you,
of the love i have inside.
the fellings will come bursting out,
and then no more can i hide.

but what will you say? what will you do?
that is what troubles me so.
you could walk away or worse yet- do nothing at all,
and leave me feeling low.

or you could act somewhat in favor of me,
and say," i like you as a friend."
i will settle for that but it won't work that way,
and our so called "friendship" will end.

i wouldn't be able to take,
the ridicule of aiming so hi,
when i, myself, am so low.
it's time to decide- i've made up my mind,
perhaps one day i'll tell you,
but for now- You'll Never Know.

"So when you feel like hope is gone, look inside you and be strong, and you'll finally see the truth...that a hero lies in you." *~Mariah Carey- Hero~

© Copyright 2001 Laura Katherine - All Rights Reserved
anonymous albert ?
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1 posted 2001-06-07 02:02 AM


great job!...and this situation was well told...i hope things work out for you...bye Laura

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

cherish
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swimming in fairy floss...........
2 posted 2001-06-07 02:03 AM


awwwwwww this is another sad one....im getting to like your poetry real quick!...i love the conclusion..ita really great that you were able to end it that way....i hope things work out for you!!..



"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

DarkAngelOfTheStars
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3 posted 2001-06-07 10:06 PM


really nice job

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

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4 posted 2001-06-09 10:57 PM


Great job here.....it's so sad. I liked it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10
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5 posted 2001-06-10 02:57 AM


i liked this one. good job

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

stace_co2003
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In a dream world
6 posted 2001-06-10 03:05 PM


sweetie, tell them! it seems to be tormenting you so much! not that I mind the poetry that comes out of it  
*hugs*  

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

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