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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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NOTE: This is surely not meant to be my best. I am posting this for reasons unknown to those not a Senior. Also, I have an announcement. This will be my last post for quite a while. I feel my poetry has gone down the tubes COMPLETELY. I am completely depressed and dissapointed in all my work and cannot post my work for an unknown period of time. So enjoy this piece!  Womanly Equal: I am woman hear me roar! My actions are justified by gender And my thoughts simply by me. You call me 'sweet' and 'cute', But do not think I'm harmless For my strength stands strong And my determination unbreakable. I am not your inferior nor superior, But rather an equal part of society. Stand with me and embrace my womanhood. Love me for who I am and what I offer Because you see, I am a woman. Your friend, your lover, your equal.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww Dopey im sorry to hear tha your leaving...i love your poetry and i wish it aint so!! But i respect the fact that you gotta take a break for a lil and I hope you find what your looking for. I really liked this poem....I am women, Hear me roar!!!! Good job hun |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
dope your stuff is great sorry to hear that your not gonna be posting for a while. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dopey...YOU DID IT!!!!!  love it my friend.......it's awesome! You shouldn't put your skills down love, you are awesome!! Hugs to you, SEA |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Dopey, truthfully I have seen a slight lull in the quality of your poetry. BUT, that doesn't mean they aren't great.They still are. Besides, doesn't it feel good to at least get some feedback about them, even if you don't like the piece.Oh well, why fight the inevitable. Just hurry back. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
*sigh* The poem was all right. You've made me a very, very sad little girl, Javes...but I respect your choice. I guess I still love ya, bro.  ~Carly "Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught..." |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
its sad to hear you stop sharing your work with us...even though it might be a unknown period of time...i hope you are lying  ...and the poem itself was very different from what i've seen before...quite interetsing read and you told it well and this mad eme think...umm"javi=woman"...huh?  ...but that wasnt what it meant  ...until then though...bye javier  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-06-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Just in case......This poem was basically a CHALLENGE.....or.....erm..... A DARE hehe. So yea...just sayin.... Thanks Susan, glad I was up to your expectations. And everybody, i'll still reply so have no fear I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
.........................................................................not fair dopes......not fair at all...  enjoyed the poem...im sure acire will well appreciate it.. |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Been readin' a little Maya Angelou? Great poem Dopey, I learned things about you that...great poem! Sorry to hear about your sabbatical "This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot |
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Dr. Jo-Bizz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97 |
well, i just joined so I don't know if your poetry has gone down the tubes or if you are only being silly and self-mutilating. I am a strong anti-feminist, but it was a good poem. SENIOR yes I know what its like to be a senior. :P dr. jo-bizz But His word was in my heart |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hmmm *thinks evily to herself*  One day can you please give me something to yell at your for?!? You've gotten to yell at me before! Grrrrr... Bel |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
No DOPEY!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooo!!!  *sigh*  *sniff* now what am i gonna read? lol. Ah, it's okay...nice poem though! I was thinking...................nah.  I still love your poems... |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
*just as disappointed, if not more so, as everyone else, at the future lack of your incredible words* "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Nice to see you lived up to the challenge, Javi. *big hugs* I'll talk to you later on. ~AF~ Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!! |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
Javi, This may have been a dare, but you do not disappoint me in any way, shape, or form. I am sad that you choose not to post for awhile, I know you'll reply, but I like reading your work, Dopes! you did a great job on this one. I love the way you portray women to be. "I am woman, hear me roar!!"  but Javi, there is nothing in this poem that I didn't like. really good job, and I hope and pray to hear from you soon. after all, you will only get better when you try.  I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. [This message has been edited by stace_co2003 (edited 06-07-2001).] |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
   i hope you start posting soon Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
blah! u should keep posting! i liked this one...not many guys are willing to write a poem about being a feminist type girl lol. go dopey! your poems shall be greatly missed. -fear- |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I leave for a month and look whats happenedto you....You turned into a girl... Okay, seriously now. I know I know- It was a dare. And you did an absolute great job, as usual. And you say this will be your last post for awhile- but it won't be. You love poetry. You enjoy reading it, you enjoy writing it, and you're good at it- whether YOU think so or not...you are. I really wish you'd reconsider. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Dopey, this isn't your best but it still made for an enjoyable read... i think i understand where you are coming from..take a good rest, pick up different things(works wonder to your moody muse), read, read, read, get better i will await your return |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
ditto to what jess said...you horrible horrible man you... |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Ok well...i didnt like this at all. You already know what i have to say about u taking a break. Regina |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Thank you all.......Thank you to those who like my poetry, and thank you those who do not like my poetry. You all make it worth while. Spice is right.....I do love poetry and I will continue to write and REPLY, but as far as posting my work is concerned I cannot. I feel that I've lost it completely....I need to go on some internal voyage to find a missing piece before I continue to post. So please, forget about MY POETRY.....as far as I'm concerned it does not exist anymore. You'll all read some new works eventually...I just, like faterider said, need a break from hearing what people think about my work. I need to concintrate on my work ALONE. Thank you for understanding, and cherish stop whining I LOVE YOU ALL AND THANK YOU FOR YOUR REPLIES!!!! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww, Dopes. It's too bad that you're going to stop sharing your work with us. I enjoy reading your work very much. You're an extremely talented poet, and I always get excited when there's a post in the forums with your name to it. I can't wait until you start sharing again, but until then I hope you keep writing. This poem was awesome! I loved it... you ROCK, Javi! --Marie "You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
same here dopes...tahts exactly why?..i stopped posting for a while...ive been writing...but havent posted them ...guess someone has a companion ...im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Awww...Dopey.... that sux. But I'll stand by you...errm something. Look forward to the return!! "If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
im not whining!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..  ...merely stating my opinion..thats all...even if i do state it one too many times...im still right..
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