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Deranger
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0 posted 2001-06-06 02:16 AM


C:\
C:\cd humanity
C:\humanity\del conscience.bat
File(s) deleted.
C:\humanity\del rationality.bat
Bad command or file name.
C:\humanity\del rationa~1.bat
File(s) deleted.

C:\humanity\future.exe
Bad command or file name.


Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes!

[This message has been edited by Deranger (edited 06-06-2001).]

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Dr. Jo-Bizz
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1 posted 2001-06-06 02:20 AM


heh.  (mutters about computer nerds and shakes head).  mankind is indeed dark. clever way to convey it.

dr. jo-bizz

But His word was in my heart
like a burning fire
Shut up in my bones;
I was weary of holding back,
And I could not.

anonymous albert ?
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2 posted 2001-06-06 02:26 AM


?!?!

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Deranger
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3 posted 2001-06-06 03:21 AM


I'm curious to see if anyone gets the humor in this...it's there...a little joke.

Aww, this is sad though...must stop drinking Code Red!

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4 posted 2001-06-06 03:57 AM


Conscience.....rationality....both deleted and the future program didn't work.
Great message.....I did not find the joke.
Alas, I suck at computer stuff hehe.
Well done though. I loved the originality in this.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

the_rescue
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5 posted 2001-06-06 10:43 AM


I like the poem dude it rocks but your codes are written wrong lol, maybe you should have like a temporary folder in there too, lol.  Nice job.

another thing future.exe cannot be done right but are you also executing humanity in itself? just curious.

[This message has been edited by the_rescue (edited 06-06-2001).]

AngelShell
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not heaven nor hell so...
6 posted 2001-07-10 07:19 PM


I'm sorry I missed this one - Very interesting.
I, of course, have many ideas all of which are floating around in my head and molding together, confusing themselves...

~First they tell you, you can’t sleep alone in a strange place, then they tell you, you can’t sleep with somebody else~

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