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Teen Poetry #4

please it's been a year

little_krazy_poet
Junior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 41

0 posted 2001-06-06 01:32 AM

well this thing with girls is still lingering in my mind and is giveing me something to write about

depression depression
what more can i say
when i've been like this
in and out of every day

ive been like this
since that time
no matter what i have said
things haven't been that fine

i hope you never have to feel
well.. this pain
i feel looked down at
theirs lots of shame

so let this stop
i don't want it any more
don't call me tomorrow
i know what's in store

Dr. Jo-Bizz
Member

since 2001-06-06

Posts 97

1 posted 2001-06-06 01:44 AM

aaaaaaaah a RHYMING one! cool! rock on..

jo-bizz

But His word was in my heart
like a burning fire
Shut up in my bones;
I was weary of holding back,
And I could not.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-06-06 02:02 AM

good job...i enjoyed this poem...and its something hard...hope things ease out for you

...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-06-06 03:55 AM

I enjoyed this one. One of my favs by you.
You expressed very well on this one!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-06-06 07:51 AM

I enjoyed this alot...tough situation tho. I know what your goin through cuz i've been there and at times still am. ::hugs:: I hope things will get better...if you ever need to talk feel free to e-mail me at Acabalena36@Aol.com

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