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Shape of His Lips
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Shape of His Lips |
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Words_of_Glitter Member
since 2000-10-25
Posts 90USA |
It's so true what they say about being in love Feels like you're lifted above everyone and your feet cannot touch the ground Never wanting to come down Back down to the place where your feelings are solid And it's so much easier to deal with the here-and-now instead of dreaming about the rest of your life But your simple, sweet words can make everything seem okay Make me forget about a bad day and just want to stay right where you are I would rather do nothing with you, than something without you I know it when it's real because I can definitely feel the empty, dull ache in my insides The ache of being unsure And when I am trying to reminisce and remember the last time I felt like this...I try, but I can't Don't think I ever have felt like this before I hate knowing that I care more about you Want to be with you more That you can live without me Not that I can't live without you I just don't want to have to... Not even for a day. So, we're off to a rocky start How could it ever work? Sitting here wondering if there will be more happiness than hurt Maybe another guy wouldn't bounce my heart around and push it inside-out like silly putty But...maybe no other guy could stretch it to its limits and make it bounce as high What if there really is no security? No, there's no trust Just weakness in my knees upon your slightest touch The brush of your lips across my forehead could not be more beautiful if it came from an angel... I wonder if you think about me half as much as I think about you Hope that you do And that we're on the same wavelength, Because if your thoughts were opposite, but equally as powerful, they would knock me off my feet (First sign of defeat) Sometimes I want to wish everything away so I would never feel the pain when I hear you said that today just isn't a good day... I always want to be with you Maybe if I was sure that your heart was in it like mine, it all wouldn't be nearly as exciting and I would've given up long ago Or maybe I just like to pretend to be in love And all I really care about is the shape of your lips "No person is worth your tears and the only one who is will never make you cry" [This message has been edited by Words_of_Glitter (edited 06-06-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hmmmmmmm you reign your feeling of love throughout the poem but at the end LUST pulls through. Who knows the answer to the ending question, nobody but you. I enjoyed this poem very much.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
AMazing poem....Great job and keep on writing !  |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
wow that was really good I liked It a lot way to express the feelings and then just the sudden turn from love to lust really was cool good read |
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