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Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

0 posted 2001-06-05 08:04 PM

A part of me dies
Every single day
With every little change
With every word I say

Part of me fades away
Everytime I blink my eyes
I try to hold on to everything
But a part of me still dies

Each tear that falls from my eyes
Carries away a part of me
So I try to keep from falling apart
But no matter what, pieces is what I'll be

Now I can finally see
What I have missed all along
And since I have finally figured it out
I have found a way to be strong

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow. I feel kinda sorry for it...

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-05 08:54 PM

very emotional...I liked this

obscurity of cloud
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since 2001-05-11

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2 posted 2001-06-05 10:03 PM

Yes, this has such strong emotion. It's quite sad. Email if you ever want to rant!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-06-05 11:24 PM

Well done. I liked this one a lot!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-06-05 11:53 PM

i loved the emotions and the way you expressed it...i related to it and youw rote it well...great job...bye Amanda

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

5 posted 2001-06-06 01:00 AM

Heavens~
This was amazing. Wow. I am so speechless. What a poem. Im gonna add this to my library. Keep up the good work!!!

"If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend."

the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

6 posted 2001-06-06 11:24 AM

ok second one of your poems I am putting in the library I realy liked this it was cool.

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
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7 posted 2001-06-06 12:59 PM

Awww hun! This was such an amazing poem..u really got your feelings out there well. I've been in that place too many times to count. Everything will eventually be ok (even if you dont believe that now..i didnt believe it either)...if ya ever need to talk just e-mail me ok?? ::hugs::

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