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Teen Poetry #4

The Mirror in the Hall

Kosetsu
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

0 posted 2001-06-05 04:48 PM

A ghost haunts the mirror,
That hangs upon my wall,
The reflection there is not mine,
On the mirror in the hall.

A ghost haunts the mirror,
That I peer into,
I see the look of horror’s face,
The looks of fleeting few,

A ghost haunts the mirror,
That cries in the night,
I watch the weeping image there,
That glows with haunting light.

A ghost haunts the mirror,
That hangs upon my wall,
The reflection there is not mine,
On the mirror in the hall.

"Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Shakespeare

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-06-05 05:03 PM

whoaa...this poem gave me a awesome feeling...*goes back and reads it again*...whoaaa this poe...hahaha...but great job...i really enjoyed it as you can tell...the way you wrote is very nice...great poem here

...bye Adam

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-06-05 10:57 PM

I liked this one a lot. Well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Deranger
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since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

3 posted 2001-06-05 11:10 PM

Kinda poeish, i agree. The repetition is what probably did it. Love the title.

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-06-05 11:17 PM

Ohhh, I like this very much! Creepy in a good way

SEA

the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

5 posted 2001-06-06 11:34 AM

this was awesome and as the others said very poeish, reminds me of the raven.

in the silence of the night I hear angels voices singing your name oh how beautiful is your name as they sing over and over. (SPOKEN)

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-06-06 12:55 PM

I always felt like there was a whole other world in a mirror and i dont know why...i really enjoyed this poem..kinda eerie but great!

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