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Master
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0 posted 2001-06-05 03:58 PM


Without a reason, seasons come to pass
We sit alone in front of dusty windows
And still we gaze and still we ask the glass
“Hold back for us the evanescent winters
Without a reason do not let them pass...”

We listen to the clocks’ familiar chime
We watch our cigarettes diminish into ashes  
We drown our sorrows in the pleasant wine
Perhaps, with time, we will regain our passion
We listen to the clocks’ familiar chime...

Without a reason, seasons come to pass
We sit alone in front of broken mirrors
And still we gaze and still we ask the glass
“Allow our friends forever to be near us
Without a reason do not let them pass
Don’t let the seasons pass without a reason...”

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 06-05-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-06-05 04:06 PM


new favorite from you...loving this one! and I'm keeping it! ( in my library   ) SEA
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2 posted 2001-06-05 04:53 PM


i really liked it...real imagery with truth ...bye

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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3 posted 2001-06-05 10:12 PM


AWESOME job here. I love the flow and ryhme and the whole poem was just amazing. I really loved this. It hit me.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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