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luvnkris
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0 posted 2001-06-05 08:49 AM



Thankyou

Thankyou for this last year Kris
You’re a blessing in disguise
With every look and every kiss
You’re meant for me I realise

Thankyou for being so perfect too
In so many different ways
I love everything about you
Even if I tend to not say

I love the way you look at me
And don’t let me look away
Coz now my love I can see
Your eyes tell everything you’ll say

I love that speckle of brown
In your gorgeous deep blue eyes
I love how you hate to frown
And how can I when I see your eyes

I love the way you touch me
So soft and full of love
And the way you kiss me
Its like your lips are from heaven above

I love the way you stroke my hair
And tuck it behind my ears, so soft
I love when you be a bear
And hug me so very tight or soft

This last year made me realise
That yes dreams can come true
You’re my blessing in disguise
And you’re everything to me too

Thankyou for coming into my life
You’re my soulmate forever more
3yrs more babe, I’ll be your wife
And we will stay together forever more

I love you babe so much
Like you will never know
I know I’ll always feel you touch
Thankyou, I love you, I’ll never go



* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*


[This message has been edited by luvnkris (edited 06-05-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-06-05 09:13 AM


This was such a beautiful tribute to your boyfriend!!! Very sweet  
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2 posted 2001-06-05 05:10 PM


sweet poem...a great tribute...hope you showed or gave him a copy...nice job here ...bye jo

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3 posted 2001-06-05 11:15 PM


Awwww such a wonderful tribute to your man. I enjoyed this.

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4 posted 2001-06-06 01:09 AM


Kris~
I am assuming that your boyfriend wrote this for you because of the beginning. What a sweet guy you have. To bad mine's not more like yours. Thanks for posting it. Its really sweet!

"If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend."


luvnkris
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5 posted 2001-06-06 08:28 AM


Hey,
kris - kristian is my boyfriend!   and i wrote this for him. i was thinking about giving it to him on our 1 yr anniversary which is in a few weeks!
also, does anyone have any ideas about something nice to do on our anniversary?! plz help! thanks!
Luv Jo
xoxo

* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



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6 posted 2001-06-06 11:17 AM


awww that was really cute and a great tribute to your b/f nice jobI would be honored to get a poem like that dedicated to me lol.
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