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Meggie1986
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since 2001-05-22
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California

0 posted 2001-06-04 11:40 PM


She laughs to much.
What right has she to laugh
At a world that can be so sad?
She laughs to much.
What right has she to be happy
With a world that can be so twisted?

She smiles to much.
What right has she to smile
In a world that can frown?
She smiles to much.
What right has she to grin
In a world that can scow at her?

She loves to much.
What right has she to love
With a world that can be so cold?
She loves to much.
What right has she to be kind
In a world that can be so mean?

They ask each other these questions
While I laugh, smile, and love.
Because my world is joyful,
And my world smiles,
And my world is full of love.

I am just trying to share.
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This one was kind of spur of the moment, and not one of my best.  Please comment!

*One meets his destiny often in the road he takes to avoid it.

© Copyright 2001 Meaghan - All Rights Reserved
fozzyozzy
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since 2001-03-15
Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia
1 posted 2001-06-04 11:51 PM


spur of the moment aint so bad.  I do it all the time.  Good poem here.  I really dig the message. to the library with it

"This is cactus land!!!"-T.S.Eliot

Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2001-06-05 08:09 PM


I enjoyed this a lot. Great job on it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?
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3 posted 2001-06-06 12:04 PM


you wrote this very well on this subject...i liked it a lot!...great job ...bye Meaghan

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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