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A poem reply to LC's "just venting"...
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A poem reply to LC's "just venting"... |
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KeLicious New Member
since 2001-05-24
Posts 9PA, USA |
Hey everyone, I'm just letting out some emotions, so bear with me, this is a reply to "::just venting::" written by LCsftball16. It felt good when you were gone? And I'm suppost to keep living, strong, Even though you hate me for being with him. A love, that is completely different than friendship. Deep down, I can't love him, yet he has poisoned my thoughts, my mind. And the more i think about it, the more I hate/love him. It's such a mixed up feeling I wish would go away. I wish... I could disappear sometimes, and yet u say I always take the spotlight?? Why can't I see the light? Do u know I'm the girl in, "Uncomfortable in my own skin"? I can't get better than what I have now, and I'm not happy with it, but I have no courage to say goodbye. It's not easy being me, can't u understand? Your friendship means more than u think. It makes me happy to be with u, but I, "deserve to keep crying." |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Wonderful poem...you really got your feelings out there  nice job! |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
wow can i relate or what, well written *Kimmie* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Kelly I enjoyed your poem. Well done here. I know a bit of the story behind these poems. Try to keep these poems directed to your friend on low key...we wouldn't want hate poems flying around here, would we? Hope to see more  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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