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Diablo's Angel |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
You’ll never know The horrors I’ve known The sickness of my existence Will never plague your heart And you’ll never know The mad rush of demons Roaring and plundering And even worse, To know it’s all you Your decayed heart And it’s wilted limbs That you vainly try to move To find your defense Only to discover That no one cares now And no one ever will And soon enough, You’ll join them This, my love, You will never know The last visions Of dying innocence And all that never was You’ll never be forced Into realizing the irony Of a living body With a dead soul But I know “Phoenix” 4 June, 2001 "...if you want love you must be love.." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done!! I thought you wrote this one so well. I love the title too...wow. I really liked this one! MORE!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow!! this really packs a punch! Excellent!  |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
I like the quasi-gothic ambience this peice sorta radiates... Ps, I LOVE THE PUMKINS! Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
wow this was totally awesome. i loved it. great job. It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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Meggie1986 Junior Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 41California |
Wow, really striking. This is a beautiful, and slightly fightening piece. Great job! *One meets his destiny often in the road he takes to avoid it. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
wow!...this hit me at my heart...you wrote it soo real...this poem was ME!...i loved this piece...hope to see more! ...bye  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-05-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very well written...full of emotions. keep it up. thanks for the read hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Val, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Michel |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Your right, none of us will ever know n e of what you've gone through because they are your own personal experiences. This poem was full of emotion and you expressed it nicely. I enjoyed the read...keep it |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Well, I really didn't mean that nobody could understand. It'd actually be quite foolish to think that I alone feel a certain way. Of course there's people in the world who understand. And I don't mean me in particular, I mean everyone like me. Everyone that I'm like. There are just certain things about us that others will never understand, but hopefully no hate will build there. I've had more than my fill. Thank you all so much for the replies. I appreciate it. "...if you want love you must be love.." Billy Corgan, Smashing Pumpkins [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 06-12-2001).] |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
i really liked this one. great job.  fall hard, practice harder not to fall |
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