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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
With the love of two, I'm so confused. With the one, I feel used. And with the other, I feel safe and excepted. But then with the other, I was intercepted. I love them both, and my love, I don't who it is more for. And when I see one, it hurts all the way to my core. The very thought of hurting one, brings tears to my eyes. I know they don't feel this way, but I can't help loving two guys. fall hard, practice harder not to fall |
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little_krazy_poet Junior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 41 |
well i know what you mean i love two at this time and well thay hate eachother and the is really hard but what i have been learning go with the one that truely loves you. WRITE WHAT YOU FEEL!! AND DON’T LET ANYONE TELL YOU TO DO OTHERWISE |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Well see i'm not quite sure which that is krzy little poet, see 1 knows i love him 2 pieces, the other, he only has a small idea of how i feel. that's y i wrote that poem. right now i'm so confused that's it's slowly driving me crazy. I dont know maybe neither of them knows how i TRULY feel but what do they care for anyway. fall hard, practice harder not to fall |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done, but you will need to figure things out. Good luck  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
here's hoping you choose with your heart  |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
YOu know, not to long ago (say, um...1900 hundred years ago...in pre-christian Europe) it was perfectly acceptable to be in love with two people. It was the Romantic Peroid that really entrenched this whole, "one and only" concept...but...anywho, i'll lay off society for now. So, from what i've heard/learned, three's a crowd. It isn't fair to any of you to dangle by the "what if's". I don't want to give you advice, i'm pretty much the plague when it comes to that sorta of thing. But i liked your poem...uh... Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Go for the nicer person. You should end 1 relationship at least. Having both right now is not being honest and might haunt you in the future. Hope things go well. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Val, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Michel |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Whoa tough situation here hun...i say go for the guy who is best for you and who makes you more happy because thats the one who will most likely treat u right but its too hard to have two guys goin at once so i say end the relationship as soon as you know what u want. |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
nice job i liked the poem and im sure most people have felt this way. Good luck Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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