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punkrockerrobin
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0 posted 2001-06-04 08:21 AM


i'm lost and going no where,
with a place to hide.
friends to go to.
i'm lost and going no where!
can't you see
can't you help!

the friends i have they don't care,
or they are to far away to help.
the place i hide is no where to be found.
i guess i'm lost and going no where.
no where to be found.

life got to hard for me.
bit me in the butt!
for now i know how rough it can get.
cus i know i'm lost and going no where.

Robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

© Copyright 2001 Robin Hill - All Rights Reserved
Meggie1986
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1 posted 2001-06-04 11:11 AM


Nice poem.  You put your feelings in very well.  I hope you find your way!
the_rescue
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2 posted 2001-06-04 11:27 AM


Hey um robin you now better than that hun you know that there is always AT LEAST one person there and you know who I'm talking about, so unloose your self and run to him.

Ps the poem is reallly good

[This message has been edited by the_rescue (edited 06-04-2001).]

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3 posted 2001-06-04 01:27 PM


Lost and going no where.....cool poem  
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4 posted 2001-06-04 04:59 PM


Well done here, but this is sad. Don't lose hope ok? Hope to see more soon!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

punkrockerrobin
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5 posted 2001-06-05 12:48 PM


omg you guys i just wrote this cus it was in my head i'm not like that okies.
robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

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