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0 posted 2001-06-04 06:37 AM


I've waited for you for so long.
Now that i've found you i'm so happy.
We have EVERYTHING  in common.
Even though we have different views on things,
that does not stop us from caring about each other.

you love me for me.
i love you for you.
no matter how far apart we may be,
i know together we will always be.

we become stronger and stronger each day.
i say i love you.
you say you love me.
and that's the way it will be.

i'm so very happy you came along.
my waiting for so long as come to an end.
i hope you stay and not depart.
for if you did a piece of my heart you would take.


robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

© Copyright 2001 Robin Hill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-04 08:02 AM


sorry if this poem sounds like i'm just rambling it's another one of my 3 am poems. i wrote this poem for the sweetest bf ever. hes so good to me and i wanted to show him how much i care.
robin

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2 posted 2001-06-04 12:31 PM


who is your bf lol

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3 posted 2001-06-04 03:08 PM


not you jimmy. you missed your chance hehe! but i still love ya hun!
robin

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4 posted 2001-06-04 04:53 PM


Well done......this was sweet and I hope you stay this happy  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-06-04 04:55 PM


Well done, I really enjoyed this piece... keep on posting.
Zu

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