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Ana(Bitter Truth)

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Isabel Galaxia
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0 posted 06-04-2001 12:18 AM       View Profile for Isabel Galaxia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Isabel Galaxia

Ana(Bitter Truth)
Ana
You stole my color
You made me cold
You come between my boyfriend and I
You've made him scared, and made me cry
Ana
You ruin lives
You hurt, you hurt and you kill
You take, you steal
You give hell in return
Ana
You make me promises
You've taken over my life
You took advantage of my naivety
You preyed on my innocence
Ana
You are a hell
You are an obsession
You are a disease
You've plagued me
Ana
You lie
You make promises you can't keep
You come and go as you please
You've enticed me into your disease
Ana
You are my hell
You are my obsession
You are my disease*
You've plagued me
But I need you somehow

*Poetic license?  Anyone that knows me...knows..well...*sighs*  This is truthful, but I'm iffy on that line...anyone understand?
Bel


"And you're my obsession
I love you to the bones
And Ana wrecks your life
Like an anorexia life"
- "Ana's Song", Silverchair

[This message has been edited by Isabel Galaxia (edited 06-04-2001).]

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1 posted 06-04-2001 12:27 AM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

This seems to derive from Anna's Song (Open Fire) by silverchair on the Neon Ballroom Cd.
It's not a safe thing to play with....Ana kills. She takes no prisoner's......be careful Isabel

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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2 posted 06-04-2001 12:30 AM       View Profile for Isabel Galaxia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Isabel Galaxia

Sé.  Gracias, no sé qué más decir Dopey...
Bel
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3 posted 06-04-2001 12:51 AM       View Profile for cherish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherish

omg this is the weirdest thing..i was singing anna all morning on the train and while i was sitting with friends...im not lying!!!...thats what caught my attention..the title of your poem..and i got curious...yes well i agree with dopes here on this one anna is dangerous..but im glad you realise the battle you are fighting..many dont and it only becomes worse. stick in there hunny you'll find better days to come.. ..the poem was great espcially the personification...good stuff ..keep writing




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it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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4 posted 06-04-2001 01:24 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

I'm lost.......what's ana? Is it a drug or something? yeah ok fine.....I'm old.....LOL really though what is it?  
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5 posted 06-04-2001 04:25 PM       View Profile for Isabel Galaxia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Isabel Galaxia

Cherish- Funny huh?  I'd been thinking of the song for a couple of days  ..hmm. Thanks  
SEA- Anorexia nervosa.
Thanks again everyone
Bel
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6 posted 06-16-2001 03:08 PM       View Profile for Fading Away   Email Fading Away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fading Away

Very powerful words here.  I hope you're careful, and email me if you ever need soemone to talk to.  I enjoyed this poem very much.  Thanks for sharing.

--Marie

"You're the girl of my nightmares, erotic and skull-faced.
Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection.  Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." --Pulp

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yea...powerful words...hope things are better ...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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8 posted 06-17-2001 06:59 PM       View Profile for Linc   Email Linc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Linc

Hey,

    Yeah I agree the poem is very powerful, I enjoyed reading such great work. "Ana" is a horrid and painful thing and I hope and pray that anyone that is having an encounter with it that they get better   good luck and until your next poem

      -- Linc

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9 posted 06-17-2001 07:21 PM       View Profile for ethel lahootie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ethel lahootie

very good poem kt...no lie. EMAIL ME OK???? tell me whats up in life!?!? i havent talked to u in a while...hope things are ok? wel u kno what i say in response to this poem...b careful bel --jo
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10 posted 06-17-2001 09:22 PM       View Profile for Raven Skye   Email Raven Skye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Raven Skye

I liked this...sad message...good poem...I hope you're alright.

*×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×*
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11 posted 09-08-2001 04:25 AM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

Great piece, Bel! Ana takes so much from people but at the same time gives their life meaning. What is really annoying though is when someone says you are anorexic when you're not.

I really enjoyed this. once again, another fantastic post.

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

 
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