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TopGunLauren
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0 posted 2001-06-03 04:51 PM


Although thing are not perfect
Because of trial and or pain
Continue in thanksgiving
Do not begin to blame
Even though times can get tough
Fierce winds are bound to blow
God is forever able
Hold on to what you know
Imagine life without his love
Joy would cease to be
Keep thanking him for all things
Love imparts thee
Move out of "camp complaining"
No weapons there are known
On earth can yeild the power
Praise can do alone
Until we see him coming
Victorious in the sky
Will win the race with gratitude
eXalting god most high
Yes there will be some good time,and yes there will be some bad
but...
Zion waits in Glory where known are ever sad!
  Lauren

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AngelPoet87
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1 posted 2001-06-03 05:33 PM


Really good one!!!
Ina
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2 posted 2001-06-03 09:17 PM


This was great work lauren.
very impressive work!

Regina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

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3 posted 2001-06-03 10:31 PM


This was such a wonderful poem to read...it was very optomistic and forgiving...not a usual topic or mood of most the poems i read...this was refreshing   I really enjoyed it and keep up the good work!
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4 posted 2001-06-04 12:03 PM


Very beautiful poem! I loved it!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-06-04 03:24 AM


beautiful poem...i liked the feeling this poem gave me...thanks for sharing it...i like dit lots ...bye lauren

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swimming in fairy floss...........
6 posted 2001-06-04 03:52 AM


....nice work!!...very serene ..i liked reading it over and over.. ..keep posting lauren!!




"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

stace_co2003
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7 posted 2001-06-07 10:23 PM


very nice!! really cool! loved it.

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

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