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dramaqueen22086
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since 2001-05-05
Posts 50
Hadlyme, CT

0 posted 2001-06-03 02:21 PM


hey ppl, i didn't go to prom, but my bro and friends want and told me all about it, i know this sounds really bad but oh well, tell me what you think about it....

All the lights surrounding us
The music playing our song, all night

From the 1st time I saw you
I knew our love would last forever
I knew it was true

This night is full of love
There is so much to look at,
But nothing as pretty as you
You are my snowy white dove

The night will end
But the memory will last forever
My heart I couldn't lead

I love you
More than the world
You are my everything
I love you and you love me too

                                                                         


© Copyright 2001 :sunshine: ~!kellie!~ - All Rights Reserved
~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14
Posts 375
Maine, USA
1 posted 2001-06-03 03:06 PM


hey the poem was alright. those spinning heads are freakin me out tho LOL

Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2001-06-03 04:34 PM


Awesome job! Very sweetly done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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