The Wood_Stock Collection : Thinking too much.

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The Wood_Stock Collection : Thinking too much.

Wood_Stock
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since 2001-05-09

Posts 58
The little yellow

0 posted 2001-06-03 07:41 AM

- Thinking too much -

Everything I see or do,
Seems to spark another memory of you.
I miss you girl, I breathe this pain,
My mind is burnt, ripped and strained.

Try to stand, can only fall,
Overwhelmed by the weight of it all.
I've had disappointments, but none like this,
I lost myself in your departing kiss.

All I want is to be with you,
Even more, for you to want to be with me too.
It seems I'm driving a one-way street,
Scared and confused, no longer can I sleep.

Don't get me wrong, I know there are other things to do,
But you don't seem to put much importance on me and you.
Maybe it's an illusion in my head,
Or maybe it's because you know I'd wait until I'm dead.

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

1 posted 2001-06-03 03:44 PM

This was awesome!! i cant believe no one has replied.

Regina

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-06-03 04:10 PM

Great job here! I really really liked this one. Well done!!!!! I liked it so much!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

3 posted 2001-06-03 04:27 PM

OMG! i absolutly loved this! i could relate so much. great job

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

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