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MoeRocko
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since 2001-04-25
Posts 166
West Virginia

0 posted 2001-06-02 04:52 PM


~If you're not Ben, you won't get any of this~

Ladies and Gents
Let me introduce you to
Ben Redshaw the Great
He is a man of may thoughts
His mind is full of knots
But now I draw back all my shots

And No, I don't smoke pot.

We talk about nothing, which is more than alot
If you are not him, you will understand me not
I understand the insanity of Roric5
and all the odd thoughts we both contrive.

In pm boxes we consider ourselves fools
but actually this Ben character is oddly cool
But I'm going back to the World of Nonsense to rule...

This Is Not Here

How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

© Copyright 2001 Ewok Enterprise - All Rights Reserved
Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
1 posted 2001-06-02 05:18 PM


I'm guessing this is a form of an apology, or something.....a tribute to a friend?
I know what's been going down Moe....so i'm taking this as a peaceful tribute.

Nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

MoeRocko
Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166
West Virginia
2 posted 2001-06-02 05:31 PM


Dopey Dope, please remove me from this forum or w/e it is before I piss everyone off........
Godsend_1
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since 2001-04-19
Posts 247
great state of illinois
3 posted 2001-06-02 11:39 PM


dude ewok you rock man and dun leave  you seriously are an awesome friend man we had a few probs recently but we cool and the fact that we are cool after a few fueds shows that ya really care man thanx a ton  friends forever.
ben redshaw the great out!!

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be.
heh i always thought i was right here

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